Editing: Whose Reality Context Sentence

In this video, I edit a student sentence from a Whose Reality context expository essay which uses Willy Loman from Death of a Salesman as an example. 

The original sentence reads: 

‘Willy chose not to change his attitude towards himself and his family thought he is a great salesman as he is not able to accept that he was nobody, as Biff commented ‘he never knew who he was’. 

I hope that was helpful! 

~Shirlaine

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